It's not like they had time to move around a lot between sentences...
I'd have been a little confused if they ended up in different rooms instead of just slewing the 'camera' to focus on who's talking
I'd expect them to stay in pretty much the same place until the conversation ends or the other two come out for air ;)
I don’t see a thing wrong with it the way it is!
You could go on and re-post it with a revised layout and maybe then I’d see what I’m missing?
But absent that I find it both enjoyable and understandable as is!
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